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"Ramblings of a Lonely Woman" by The_Lady_in_the_Fire

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He's asleep,
he's so cute when he's asleep...
But that's not the point.
The point is,
I'm
Lonely.

Don't know why.
He's there.
Not 5 feet away.
If I put the laptop down,
and stretch out my arm,
(and almost slide off the couch)
I can touch him.

But that doesn't change how I feel.
That doesnt numb the ache in my heart.
I'm not alone.
I'm
Just
Lonely.

I was so happy,
only a few hours ago.
He was awake.
He was talking to me.
His eyes were looking into mine.
Looking into me.
The ache inside wasn't there.

At least I don't think it was there.


*sigh*

At least I have the puppy
To keep me company.
But where is that silly mutt?
Oh well.
I won't say it again.
It was the last time I'll say it...




im
lonely



(I lied)



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On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
wonderful write.... you conveyed that feeling so eloquently.... I think DoctorAsh said it well. this piece is just beautiful. Thank you.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, DoctorAsh (505) writes:
I have felt this way from time to time as well. It's like somewhere inside someone or something just, pulled the plug. Leaving us feeling unattached, or disconnected from something that should be greater, yet, we long to be absorbed by others, constantly.


On Friday August 12th, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:
This is lovely.


On Friday August 12th, 2005, ApathysKiss (459) writes:
raw piece, what heather said. ~m~


On Friday August 12th, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:
wow......


On Friday August 12th, 2005, saellem (27) writes:
that was beautiful....... i wish when i was lonely he was in arms reach.


On Friday August 12th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:
So wake him up! ~b


On Thursday August 11th, 2005, Bridge (325) writes:
this was very good and heartfelt


On Thursday August 11th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:
I absolutly loved this. So much so I have nothing decent to say. Lovely job :)



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