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Till I Die

When I told you I will love you till I die.
I meant it
But when you said it was over
I died.

I cut myself on the outside
To forget about the pain within
So thats why I lay here
On this cold hard bathroom floor
Crying for you to save me
But you don't love me.

You don't care that I'm lying here
On this cold hard floor bleeding to death
With "i love you" and "I'm sorry"
Carved into my chest

And I went a few inches too deep this time.
So don't fall to your knees by my grave
Don't say you love me.

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On Monday September 18th, 2006, Thorn (434) writes:

After re-reading this, I still stick with my original comment: heavy.

On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

so dark-lushusly sad.u have a soul not to be mistaken for a empty hole.

On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, BLACKSAINT (45) writes:

I cut myself on the outside,To forget about the pain within Crying for you to save me But you don't love me.You don't care that I'm lying here On this cold hard floor bleeding to death.With"i love you"and"I'm sorry" Carved into my chest.

On Monday July 18th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:

I am glad you expressed yourself this way. It is difficult to do. stay Strong. Mail me if you need a friend sometime

On Monday July 18th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:

really powerful stuff. i understand the feelings. the desire for some kind of retribution can be overwhelming, but it is a negative emotion. write. you are good at it

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I loved this poem, it really got me. I can relate to it, and thats what I like. You really have alot of talent here, so im glad your putting pen to paper.And I agree with what Thorn wrote about this poem "keep this up and your golden"

On Friday June 24th, 2005, Thorn (434) writes:

Wow. That's heavy; I like it. Keep this up and you're golden.

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