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the right atrium.

he said

it's painful to see you
when your heart is open
but your legs are closed

i said

it's painful to see you
when your legs are open
but your heart is closed.

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On Friday September 19th, 2008, veingo (588) writes:

A relationship at odds. Now where have I heard that befor??? ^V^

On Wednesday September 17th, 2008, carlosjackal (1722) writes:

Very well said. "he" + "i" = Fucking Disaster. Rock on, Lady Bethany! -Carlos Daddio

On Wednesday September 17th, 2008, saintedmad (1149) writes:

polar opposites. .. . i love the rightside perspective added as well .. .a different literal view. . .

On Wednesday September 17th, 2008, blue (1757) writes:

smash his peepee with gungfu and watch him come round. or just do it for fun =) ni-chan rawr.

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