DarkPoetry -|- Anna Helianthus -|- just a storm.

they say
that rainwater
can smooth
a crocodile complexion

i wonder if the salt
from his tears
can do the same

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On Thursday June 19th, 2008, Lolita (120) writes:

I don't think so, because then crocodiles would have prettier faces.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, After hours (569) writes:

What an unusual thing to say....i love it.

On Tuesday May 13th, 2008, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

Simply perfection :) Your writes are missed :(

On Saturday May 10th, 2008, saintedmad (1156) writes:

.....paradox isnt it? perfectly succinct and resonant; only you could 'see' this in the world. :} ness

On Saturday May 10th, 2008, veingo (590) writes:

So short, but powerfull. I get a hopeful, but somber feeling from this. It's good to read you again Doll. ^V^

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