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Kiss V

[Based on the painting "Kiss V" by Roy Lichtenstein]

An American embrace
A picture-perfect couple
In the moment
In love
In tears

Blonde hair
Red lips
Flawless features
Two beautiful people
Still unsatisfied

Th'unsung blessings we share
The tears fall through the air
Gave proof through the night
That our flag was still there

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On Thursday April 26th, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

Wow. That was amazing.

On Friday April 13th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

there's almost a quiet Modernist feel to your sentence structures...very bursty and staccato like you use them well.....brief montages spliced and delivered....I like that

On Friday April 13th, 2007, capt_funguy (999) writes:

exceptional little piece here... very pleasant turn for an ending... honest simple poetic bullseye ... cool man...funguy

On Friday April 13th, 2007, capt_funguy (999) writes:

that was quick ... thanks man

On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

surprised at the ending. very nice. wheres the other 30? -Kel

On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

Awesome. The end kicked my ass.

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