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An explosive concussion
Of guitars
Bass
And drums
Crashes into me like a pair of hammers against each side of my head
And then
The most brutal voice I have ever heard
Joins this sonic chaos
He does not snarl as some Satanic demon
Nor scream like a "hardcore" twenty-something in tight pants
No
His voice is a roar
A roar that conjures the mental image of a man
Who would rip you apart
With his bare hands
And never think twice about it

He bellows his desire to
MAKE THEM SUFFER
Over and over again

I am in shock
And instantly addicted
To this
Pure
Unbridled
Brutality

The sound from my stereo pummels me
With a three-minute wall
Of hate
Sadism
Torture
Brutal
Fucking
Aggression

The mayhem stops
As suddenly as it started
And I am left with a feeling
That I imagine to be not unlike
Having my brains bashed out
With a cinderblock



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On Friday March 21st, 2008, Kurashu (34) writes:
I relate to this write; I recently likened death metal (especially the more brutal version of it) to "taking a power drill to your temple as your face is smashed into a brick wall at fifty miles and hour." However; CC is alright. Try some Dying Fetus and Cryptopsy, yes?


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, TheDismantled (21) writes:
dirty aggressive ode to a great band


On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, Irioth (12) writes:
I love them too. Even though I got punched in the face in their moshpit.


On Saturday December 2nd, 2006, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
I have to be honest, I'm not as big a fan of death metal as I used to be. But I can still listen to corpse and morbid angel. Those two bands are special :D This helped me remember what I loved about them. Write on.


On Saturday December 2nd, 2006, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
"And I am left with a feeling/That I imagine to be not unlike/Having my brains bashed out/With a cinderblock." Hehe..this made me smile, such a great killer last stanza and a wicked band tribute :)


On Saturday November 25th, 2006, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
VERY nice.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, blue (1741) writes:
I miss Chuck. =/ ~b


On Monday November 20th, 2006, soul dancer (164) writes:
I relate to this poem...there are some metal singers whose guttural utterances make my heart pound and send shivers up my spine. How brilliantly you translated that feeling.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (697) writes:
I saw them in concert, and the guitarist signed a CD for me =) He asked me if I was into metal, and I said no, more goth, and he said Oh like Rammstein? lol =) They were very sweet! ~V.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:
I;ve seen them live, too. It was an incredible experience.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
absolutely incredible post Mr.Thorn...you damn near prickled me; this explodes and then some...real thump to this, excellent!!


On Monday November 20th, 2006, rainbowgoth (12) writes:
This is so fucking amazing!!!! I love the way you describe listening to them. It's strange how sometimes we find the most shocking things to be addictive. Rock on!!!!


On Monday November 20th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
absolutely



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