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Into the Wild

Far from wretched city, the forest spirit is strong as days of yore
We remember those who dared to venture where few have gone before

In ancient land where trees grow tall and savage creatures thrive
The brave awaken inner strength and fight to survive

Weakness!!
Weariness!!
Powerless!!
To the Wilderness!!

Weakness!
The path extends so far ahead
Weariness!
Without a place to rest your head
Powerless!
The might of man a fraying thread
To the Wilderness!
Where these few brave souls are led

In the plain
Upon the hill
Surviving on unyielding will

Confront this challenge
Face this trial
Set out into The Wild!

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On Saturday September 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (25) writes:

Jet this is awesome. The way you use words is so fresh and artistic. The savage creatures bit made me laugh, though, but perhaps it's because I know what sorts of creatures you encountered in that savage land. :) Beautiful piece.

On Saturday September 30th, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:

Shut up! It sounded good and it fitted well. Leave me alone! ;)

On Sunday September 17th, 2006, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

damn. hot damn. i loved it.

On Friday September 15th, 2006, Nail Bunny (227) writes:

That is fucking sweet. I dig it.

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, vaultgrl (236) writes:

sounds like cutting chains and running free to me, i love this, great write...

On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

*dances to it and hums*~Gothic

On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:

If I werent so gosh dern afraid of becoming lost and being forgotten, I might take your advice. As is, I fear the wild...but that's just my opinion. I like the rhyming to this. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:

i wanna go on an adventure. its not fair :( i like this a lot. thanks for sharing.

On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:

~YEAH! i like this poem a lot...have no bounds...be the captain of your soul and march on with your will's benediction...I can relate to every aspect of this...Very cool!

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