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What are Words?

"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to his pen.

"Lines and shapes"
Said the Poet's pen
to his page.

"letters and words"
Said the page
to Her eyes.

Come closer...
Let me whisper in your ear...

"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to his mouth.

"Motion and vibrations"
Said the Poet's mouth
to the air.

"sounds and words"
Said the air
to Her ear.

Come closer...
Let me hold you in my arms...

"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to Hers.

And though neither spoke a word...

"True Love"
Replied Her heart
to His.

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On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:

Darling, this always moves me. I seriously think it's one of your best. I miss you, post more fucktard

On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:

hey! I own the copyrights for 'fucktard'!! you owe me tacos lady.

On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, waterchica999 (38) writes:

that was just beautiful and a wonderfully new way to see it

On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, Bluegirl (255) writes:

awwww. Wow. I got tingles reading this. Well done. :)

On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

Beautiful piece! I love the flow and imagery. Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday September 26th, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti (344) writes:

this felt magical and romantic. i love it.

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

The flow of this piece alone wraps about the the mind in a romanced fashion that lures all of your senses to a hush. This piece reminds me, personally of those moments when you're most deeply in love. True love.

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

.. and to speak on a more deeper level, the connection spoken between the poet, his pen, his heart, her, and him.. all that of whis is spoken here is reverberated in an echo that is only rewitnessed in the eyes of the reader.

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

Thank you. This is exquisite.

On Monday February 20th, 2006, MindRape (902) writes:

awwww this is sooooo SWEET! i love this! :D a lot deeper than the avg love poem

On Monday February 6th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:

oh im so faving this...since i read it millions of thousands of times.

On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

i can't believe that i haven't commented on this one before, i could have sworn i did..i've read it many times, and it still strikes me with the same calm trickling feeling. it's like a peace-filled summit, and your words are at the top..

On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

..winding throughout in such a swift trickling motion. every bit of side details added to this piece were expertly placed and quietly woven. i see this as a person lamenting softly, repeating the words over and over until the become seamless..

On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

..and utterly flawless with stream quality. i could babble about this piece for a long time, it's such a special poem.

On Thursday January 26th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

Wow. Thank you :)

On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:

oh, this is so beautiful... i love it...

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Collective Amnesia (251) writes:

awww very very sweet.. yeah i know too much of a girl comment...bravo, encore

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Army Barbie (501) writes:

You are amazing...and if I could say that a million times it wouldn't be enough. I could even say exuberant and it wouldnt qualify as exemplary. So take this meaningless babble as my love for this piece.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, NikesRain (1508) writes:

beautifully done..... the concept of love needing no words to be exchanged, absolutely great... my heart itself sighed at the ending..

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, blue (1779) writes:

=) damn man! that was fucking fantastic!! take a bow* ~b

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

Thank you, Blue. *Bows*

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, cherietree (21) writes:

i like it !!! luv zoes mate n zoe

On Friday January 6th, 2006, Irioth (12) writes:

Wow, awesome. This is amazingly well done.

On Friday January 6th, 2006, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

Thorn, you have outdone yourself... this piece expresses such love and emotion... I can't believe or describe how perfect this is.

On Friday January 6th, 2006, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

wow. you have just outdone everything i have ever written. absolutely wonderful.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

I wouldn't go so far as to say THAT...

On Thursday January 5th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:

Dude...are you related to Shakespear??...but really this is just wonderful. ~*~Dying_Angel~*~

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

Dude...

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

Oh Oh Oh Oh...AH! Wonderful wonderful wonderful...so very vividly described...and, yes, words can be said without ever speaking. Beautiful. *Evangel*

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, LordBrosnian (65) writes:

Very visual...good scheme. I thouroughly enjoyed it...ah THE WAXING HOPELESS ROMANTICISM!!

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, vaultgrl (239) writes:

...oh my....i have to agree with kuro and poetic.....this is so eliquent and full of beauty.....great write.....

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

Holy crap. Wow. That is so amazing. BEAUTIFULLLLLLL. ♥♥

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:

it doesnt matter if its not ur 'style' its great..and very cute..a love poem if i've ever seen one! i bet she'll love it, great job! -Kel

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

It's not specifically about anyone, really. It's the concept that words cannot truly capture love...

On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, Thorn (443) writes:

True, it's not my usual style... it just hit me.

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