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L'arbre Morte

Quand je regarde
Par la fenetre...
Je ne me sens
Rien.

Mon coeur est comme le ciel:
Froid
et
Gris

Mes emotions sont comme les arbres:
Mortes

Je vois un arbre
Mais pas de feuilles

Cet arbre a l'air deprime...
Quand je le regarde dans ma glace,
Je vois...

Cet arbre...

C'est moi.

[English version pour ce qui ne parle pas le francais]

When I look
Out the window...
I feel
Nothing.

My heart is like the sky:
Cold
and
Grey

My emotions are like the trees:
Dead

I see a tree
Devoid of leaves

This tree seems so depressed...
When I look at it in my mirror,
I see...

This tree...

Is me.

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On Tuesday May 8th, 2007, An Expired Member (12) writes:

you know... you never cease to give me chills when i read your work...

On Monday October 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (25) writes:

C'est triste... je me sens deprimee moi-meme quand je le lis, mais au meme temps c'est belle... tres bien fait, tu m'as inspire d'ecrire un poeme en francais maintenant :)

On Friday June 16th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:

C'est bonne, monsieur! Je t'aime Francais.. mais j'ecrire ca langue plus de mal. Pardon my French but it has been many years since I last wrote in the beautiful language. You do it much justice! -Josh

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (695) writes:

Oh that was great! I did spot a few mistakes, but really, the poem was so great I only noticed them when I read it a 2nd time! ~V.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, Thorn (440) writes:

Well, thank you :). I'll have to go about correcting them. I appreciate your bringing them to my attention; as a French scholar, I should know better. *Is somewhat embarassed*

On Monday February 27th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

Chilling

On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, DarkPoet (226) writes:

C'est belle cette poem, j'aimerais voir plus comme ca.

On Sunday December 18th, 2005, broken_spirit (43) writes:

very nice i just wonder how you came up with the ideal to write it in a different langue

On Sunday December 18th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:

I dunno, I was planning on writing one in French anyways, and then my teacher gave us an assignment, and it was a right-place-right-time thing.

On Monday December 12th, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

c'est du bon travaille, ca... un poem deprime mais beau... bien ecrit, et bien traduille... je l'aime

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:

Merci, Lapin, mon ami. A mon avis, on doit ecriver plus souvent en francais, non?

On Monday December 19th, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

Oui. Mais apres l'examain, je pense que je ne parlerai que l'anglis pour un semain ou plus.

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, Jerrica (125) writes:

Awsome! Foreign or not, very clear in it's delivery! Greatest...simplistic..a wonderment. *J*

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

sorry i didnt comment on this b4 i left..but again..you've captured me with this write... is this the one you wrote for the class...? a class...whatever..but i like it..great write! ♥-Kel

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, A Burning God (61) writes:

*gives Thorn some water to make himself better, like the tree* very nice!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

Thorn-san!! So great.. distinctly clear in its delivery! *bows* sugoi! ~b

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:

Arigato, Blue Tzu!

On Friday December 2nd, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

hai! =)

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