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Fear
A new breed of fear
Not of losing you
Because of what I did
Not of losing you
To someone at your own school
But fear
Of losing you
To another who lost you
Before I came along

Panic
I begin to panic
This new breed of fear
Is taking hold of me
I couldn't live without you
But does this mean the end?

"Someone help me..."
"Oh, please, God, HELP ME!!"
"They're trying to take it all away..."
"I... don't want to die!"

Sorrow
I'm overwhelmed by sorrow
Upset by what I heard
Distraught by what you said
Crushed that you might leave me
To be with him again

Speak to me softly
The words I need to hear
Save me and protect me
From this new breed of fear



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On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:
wow... amazing.. ill give it a 96 just because i felt it missed something


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
i dont think the ending sucks..and wow...what a blast..i especially love the last stanza..paragraph..whatever u wanna call it...i dont know what to say..-Kel


On Monday September 12th, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
this poem is so raw, emotional, and very disheartening. i could only imagine the anxiety of being in a situation like this. great write though. ....-samone


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Bellezza (26) writes:
I understand this kind of fear. One of my own at the moment actually. Good job.


On Thursday September 8th, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:
Thats crazy, man. I love the 'Tallica tye in. a good write


On Saturday September 3rd, 2005, broken_spirit (43) writes:
this is really good.....i've been grounded lately so i haven't been able to get on.....again this is good....


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, Doc (189) writes:
yes, the ending needs some work, but its a good idea


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
well done


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:
Yes, the ending sucks. I'll make it better later, but for now: deal.



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