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My Droning Tangent

Can you hear me yell and screm?
Are you just not listening?
I'm demanding your attention,
Wanna say what's on my mind, and...

I...
Won't shut up 'til you hear me out!!

Listen to my every word,
I've got something to say.
I don't care if I'm ignored,
I'll say it, anyway!

I've been thinking all day,
About what I'm gonna say.
Suddenly, my words get stuck.
Forgot what I had in mind, but...

I...
Won't shut up 'til you hear me out!!

Listen to my every word,
I've got something to say.
I don't care if I'm ignored,
I'll say it, anyway!

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On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

another awesome work....and idk what else to say..cept that this sounds like a really awesome song! -Kel

On Thursday August 25th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:

Yeah, alright, so what is it you have to say. You complain and you scream and you demand attention and respect and love, but that's all contingent on others. I want to see something from YOU

On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:

This is the only one you've read, isn't it.

On Thursday August 25th, 2005, Liz (406) writes:

I really see a lot of potential in your work, but I feel like you're keeping the good stuff to yourself.

On Tuesday May 30th, 2006, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

All his best is out here for everyone to see. Just look, and you will find.

On Monday August 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (38) writes:

it's good.I'll listen.

On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

Speak, for we shall listen, even if the world cannot...

On Monday July 25th, 2005, Thorn (440) writes:

Cannot? Or will not?

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, broken_spirit (44) writes:

i know how it is like to want to be heard....good write

On Monday July 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:

kindof reminds me of when i was a kid and i wanted something and i wouldn't shut up til i got it. lol i like it

On Monday July 18th, 2005, thornyrose (30) writes:

good write Thorn...

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