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Gnawing Emptiness

I close my eyes
Let out a sigh
As I live another lie

I feel it coming over me
Like so many times...

Before

Another revelation
This clawing, devoid sensation
The emptiness
The loneliness
They bring me down again
Another revelation
This clawing, devoid sensation
I may not ever know
If this will ever...

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On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Zen (604) writes:

swwweeeet

On Monday December 19th, 2005, Nail Bunny (222) writes:

I should have found this a long time ago. Simple, to the point, yet heartbroken by the emptyness and pointlessness of continuing...

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, LiP Stiches (60) writes:

i can feel the sprial that brings you down into the depths of ur soul...very turning...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

very short, but very good. you can almost feel the emotion...again, great write -Kel

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, LiP Stiches (60) writes:

short and real..........i enjoyed it!

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

beautiful. absolutely.. beautiful.

On Tuesday August 9th, 2005, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

i know the feeling. nice write, its very good

On Monday August 1st, 2005, An Expired Member (38) writes:

Love it

On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, broken_spirit (43) writes:

i love this

On Tuesday July 5th, 2005, Irioth (12) writes:

Very good. What you describe is all too true sometimes.

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

grea write, I enjoyed reading this.

On Saturday June 25th, 2005, An Expired Member (41) writes:

Very well written.

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

i really like it. good job

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