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It’s pouring and I wish the rain was warm, like the family football games and nightly hide and seek army style that seem to have become things of the past—disappearing like a friend when in need.

The storm outside smells like lost memories,
fallen plans,
and broken promises.

The lightening looks like unnoticed pain,
silent disgraces,
and memorized mistakes.

The rain feels like comfort stolen,
taken after my fingers glint over it,
replaced with cold loneliness.

The thunder sounds like rampaging tempers,
horror story memories,
And too many midnight fights witnessed as a child.

But I sit in the rain, and pray, that it won’t leave me, [like everyone else] because feeling this is better then not feeling at all. So I sit until the sun goes down, and welcome the chills that skip across my skin and the pain seeping in my mind, because it lets me know I’m still here. I’m still stronger because I haven’t given in.
I am still alive.
I have the scars to prove it.




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On Sunday May 21st, 2006, island warrior (299) writes:
A truly awesome piece,overflowing with real feeling.


On Friday May 19th, 2006, Sanctuary (80) writes:
Rain and memories...they have so much in common. The sense of sadness and even hope permeate through your words and as the rain continues on, so will you


On Wednesday May 17th, 2006, Circe (482) writes:
I read this before.. and couldn't comment. not even now. just that it brings back so many memories of walking back from school and wishing that things would be different at home.. being unable to relate with anyone. I love your senses.


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:
I'n short.. Good write. Was worth the readers time


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:
Kinda like the opposit feeling one gets after 5 min of Mtv.


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:
Besides the way you must have feelt while reading this. I'd like to comment that this kind of style is one of the best around. It's strucktured free-flow and as a reader it leaves me with a pure feeling.


On Monday May 15th, 2006, vaultgrl (233) writes:
....*makes it spit you back out*...thank you tara.....hope you don't learn anything too bad adam ;P...thanks......Darun, there are ppl all arouond me, and i still feel alone, thank you for understanding....Ship....i hope i didn't knock any out :(....thank


On Monday May 15th, 2006, Adaml (244) writes:
I think most of us know the feeling of being alone even with people all over that is part of what DP does for a lot of people it unites them (be it across the net) in a way that provides help from other that have the same issue(s) or feelings


On Monday May 15th, 2006, Adaml (244) writes:
What should help you even more (though i know its easy to say) is that people here seem to care for you and i know! that there are people that care for you off the site also... you know im here for you nomatter what even when


On Monday May 15th, 2006, Adaml (244) writes:
I try to be mad at you you are too good of a person to be mad at :)


On Monday May 15th, 2006, vaultgrl (233) writes:
*...thank you too....i love you all bunches....thanks for the comments


On Monday May 15th, 2006, The Fool (968) writes:
*gaps* This was just intense and lovely I wanted to sink into and just love it to death. This poem made me love you all the more, and want to hold you with dreams in my heart. This was beautiful and sorrowful sad, it just ate me


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Adaml (244) writes:
Crista, i learn more about you all the time. I dont know what i can say other then if you need to talk and to not be alone then you know you can find a friend that wont leave you when you most need them


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, SilentStalker (1314) writes:
...ah, even strength in desolation...it takes quite a strong soul to pull that off...


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, SilentStalker (1314) writes:
...still, feeling alone hurts...even if we truly aren't alone, the feeling's still there...


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Urban Shipwreck (966) writes:
Oh my. This really kicked me in the teeth. The visuals you painted for specific aspects of hurt are beautifully created and yet I wish I were staring at a blank canvas. Thank you for sharing. ~Ship



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