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Waiting For Their Return

It's gloomy outside...
It's worse in here.
The shrieking winds,
match my thoughts and tears

Tears that will never be seen...
Thoughts that will never be heard...

They float away,
at the end of the storm.
Leaving false pretenses,
of returning to a norm.

I remain,
subconciously awaiting their return.

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On Wednesday May 17th, 2006, Circe (482) writes:

the abstraction of this idea is so haunting.. leaves me waiting for something too, without them, this world feels just empty, we are all somehow incomplete. great piece.

On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:

When I write I try never to use the same word more then once.. EVER! but this was like reading your mind. the imputs you got from the rain and then how you realy saw it.

On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, LostInDespair (198) writes:

This is absolutely splendid my dear. You are getting better and better by the post. Keep it up. ~Lost~

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, dying angel (1308) writes:

"It's gloomy outside...It's worse in here." Damn!!! this will leave me thinking. i dont know i kinda got the impressiont that maybe your sad because someone left....and they might not come back? im not sure..but stay strong

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1020) writes:

That was so full of sorrow and pain. At the same time I felt a bit of hope peering through. Great job!! Julia~

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Fool (968) writes:

Aww this was just hurting me so badly, *huggles*

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