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Perfection

Perfection is impossible,
One more thing above man.
Perfection is impossible,
we will never shake that hand.

This has eluded us,
always shown us down.
For years and years continuous,
we'll never break that ground.

vaultgrl

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On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:

Alanarchys comment said it all.. *Nods a few times*

On Sunday January 29th, 2006, Alanarchy (1695) writes:

Prophetic. Show's a sense of stark nature and understanding. good one. I'll be watching out for you.

On Monday January 9th, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

very tue

On Tuesday December 6th, 2005, LostInDespair (198) writes:

I know this is out of place here and late on both counts but Happy Birthday, and welcome to DP = ) From what I have read so far your writing is lovely. You have lots of potential. ~Lost~

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, vaultgrl (233) writes:

...lol, well the birthday thing isn't late...but yea, I've been at dp for sometime now, but still thank you!...

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, Adaml (244) writes:

just a side note that person came the same timeish as you did crista

On Saturday October 15th, 2005, Alec Pure (328) writes:

this was really short but bold in its message it didnt hide it at all nice job

On Friday October 14th, 2005, Jerrica (120) writes:

really great, I like this piece a lot. You do great work my dear. *J*

On Friday October 14th, 2005, Adaml (244) writes:

This is another nice one crista, this is one of your Lighter ones :) it's good

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1040) writes:

Wonderful rhyme scheme. This is, in a sense, described as perfectly as it could be. (and yes, I know, perfection is impossible) nice job. *Evangel*

On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Doc (180) writes:

how astute. Not terribly optomistic, but solid. I like that. Peace Doc

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