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Drip Slip Ride

Drip drop drip,
Watch the needle slip.
Drip drop drip,
Pull the blade thru quick.

Slip slip slide,
Let this feeling ride.
Slip slip slide,
My emotions glide.

Ride ride ride,
Car drifting to the side.
Ride ride ride,
Decision-lets collide.

Drip drop drip,
Reality beginning to rip.
Drip drop drip,
All the drama skipped.

Drip drop drip.
Slip slip slide.
Ride ride ride.

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On Wednesday February 15th, 2006, Nail Bunny (222) writes:

oooh... i like this one... it makes me think... *pondering* drug trip or car crash? both?

On Tuesday October 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

You know that I love this poem a lot because it reminds me a lot of what I went through. I don't really care for a lot of repitition but it somehow works with this poem.idk, but i like it

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, purr_verse (1420) writes:

Very effective write; the repetition and rhythm brings real pace to this. I like the ... endlessness (?can't think of better descriptive) of the conclusion...it feels circular somehow... Great write, anyway. :)

On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, Army Barbie (478) writes:

Amazing. I loved the repition of the words and even the rhyming. Not one for rhyming poetry as I've said before...but I love this piece.

On Thursday June 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (32) writes:

intense...I related a lot to it...absolutely wonderful

On Thursday June 16th, 2005, vaultgrl (233) writes:

...thank you!!

On Thursday June 16th, 2005, Serenity (577) writes:

Powerful write :)

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