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Used to know her

I used to know her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.

I longed to be with her,
She was my best friend.
We were "friends forever,”
Then the rules started to blend.

The thought of it,
Seems so far away.
I’m curious,
Why are we so far apart today?

I wish sometimes,
That I could take it all back.
Take back our fantasies
Just skip that whole track.
I love her I just wish she loved me back.

I used to love her,
I swear we were best pals.
We talked of the future,
Talked of a large beautiful house.

People tell me “just let her run her course”
But I want my sister back,
I can’t let her run into this wall full force.

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On Wednesday May 23rd, 2007, An Expired Member (8) writes:

good writing

On Thursday November 16th, 2006, sixsixnine (592) writes:

raw poem> very nice

On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, Mylissa (1053) writes:

Absolutely amazing. I enjoyed this.

On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1751) writes:

Fragile but powerfull

On Thursday May 4th, 2006, up_at_five (4) writes:

Beautiful Crista, Love the clarity, the emotion drips off the page Dad

On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, monalisamarie (146) writes:

Awesome work

On Thursday November 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

It is hard sometimes to put space between girl and friend...it is for me anyhow...Very touching write

On Friday November 11th, 2005, vaultgrl (233) writes:

.....she wasn't my girfriend....she's my actual sister.....thanks though....

On Thursday October 20th, 2005, Ifantisiz (22) writes:

you touched my soul...sisters, I really feel you on this one. Great job

On Wednesday October 5th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

It swelled up my throat because my sister is doing the same thing...i do love this poem

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Err0r (562) writes:

Interesting perspective ...still a great write though.

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Alec Pure (328) writes:

wow this was good i think you could have elaborated more about the wall she was running into and such but this was very nice indeed

On Saturday June 18th, 2005, Valentine (490) writes:

so sad..yet so beautiful..

On Thursday June 16th, 2005, ashottothetemple (72) writes:

u have great proential keep at it fledgling )(SpiretT)(

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, vaultgrl (233) writes:

....thanks :)

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, Serenity (577) writes:

No need to be intimidated. There are a lot of warming people here.

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, vaultgrl (233) writes:

Thanks a bunch...kinda intimidated by you guys, you're all really good writers....

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, Serenity (577) writes:

Great write hon :) And welcome to DP

On Wednesday June 15th, 2005, PaperPromises (75) writes:

I know this feeling all too well.. with a sister of my very own, good luck dear, just hang in there -Cor

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