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"The Man Whom God Forgot" by shadowsinthelight

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There is a man whom God forgot
A soul lost from His memory
He exists in His blind spot
This is why he wanders eternally

He does not belong to heaven
He does not belong to hell
Him, neither can claim
For they do not know his name

I met him one starless night
In a cold winter's dream
He walked up to the fire
And sat across from me

I could not focus on his face
Shifting with the flame's dance
Ebony pupils remained clear
In new colors of brilliance

He spoke, "So you sit before me
A lost expression in your eyes
Yes, I do know the secret
The mystery and meaning of life

I can fill your bending ears
Full of cryptic truths and lies
But what I say or you think you hear
Will not change that look in your eyes

But you do have questions tonight
You have one less day in your life
One less day to make things right
You've just spent another day in paradise

You still believe in happiness
And you still believe in love
You have sent your prayers skyward
And received nothing but quiet from above

It may seem very strange
But silence is an answer unto itself
You must learn your own life
Walk the road by yourself

Go ahead, send your prayers outward
But your answers will come from within
It is all in the perception of your mind
The voice of God speaks from within

Love and happiness are phantoms
Living in the corner of your sight
You are fortunate if they touch you
A feeling as fleeting as twilight

I once knew the taste of rain
And the spaces in-between
I once lived a tender touch
And I used to have a dream

Others can remove what you call your own
But you do deflect the wind that blows
As you do reflect the light that glows
You are responsible for your own soul

Take the time to taste the rain
And recall a forgotten face
By remembering a lost name
You have justified their eternal place

And you, God has not forgotten
You are not beyond salvation
Beware, Satan has his eye on you
You are not beyond damnation

You can get by quietly
And manage to survive
Or you can rise above the crowd
Either way, you are alive

Though you may feel all alone
There is only one who is on his own
But you will exist in the eternal frame
If even one remembers your name"

He arose next to the fire
And became the smoke of Good-Bye
He allowed the breeze to take him
And I was left to live or to die

Of all the billions of lives
He lived his in anonymity
His soul slipped through the cracks
Save for one, he did it anonymously

Yes, I will endure the fire
And taste the falling rain
And I will attempt to know
Those spaces in-between

There will be love and hate
Joy and sorrow in my life
But for now
I have just lived another day in paradise

And I will remember
Your face and name
Maybe, one day, for me
You will do the same

©1999 by steve giacomini




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On Sunday January 13th, 2008, Argentum (17) writes:
I remembered loving this poem when I was a member before. I'm so glad to find it again!


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Yes ..if this is as good as it gets..savoring awareness and honoring others seems like a worthy goal indeed.


On Wednesday March 21st, 2007, An Expired Member (12) writes:
Breathe Taking


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:
Tremendous


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:
quite essential it's perverse manner...flows through the creaks where the rivers once flowed.


On Monday December 4th, 2006, An Expired Member (27) writes:
wow... that was just... wow! i could only dream of writing the way you do :) great job, keepr rockin and writing


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Ainsof (1729) writes:
a tale most intricately woven by a campfire for the ages, with the fabric of the universe for the faceless years before us... memerable is a litote


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (95) writes:
This is the most amazing piece of work i've ever seen on this site


On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (408) writes:
wow. so much in this piece to awaken the parts of my spirit that have been dormant too long, so much i have to think about now. powerful. extremely wonderful write


On Monday November 21st, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:
That was beautiful. As I read the words, I was taken on a journey. Bravo!


On Thursday September 15th, 2005, Esau (281) writes:
yeah, i am one of the expired number posts below, and my reactions are still the same.


On Thursday April 7th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:
So beautiful


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, happilydepressed (215) writes:
*in awe*


On Monday December 27th, 2004, Astra Dei (649) writes:
it was really long, which usually puts me off, even with my own works, but this one kept my attention. even flow and rythm.


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Butterfly (123) writes:
This was really awesome. It flowed so nice and...man this was just awesome.


On Sunday November 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:
the flow, the flow man. awe striking. "You are not beyond salvation," "You are not beyond damnation." great.


On Monday September 27th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (559) writes:
this was excellent all the way though the rhyming the content it was all just masterfully done


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
Wow, I loved this piece, I wish I could write half as good as u.


On Friday May 21st, 2004, Liath (41) writes:
This is such an awesome piece. I printed it off and showed a fwe of my friends, and one of my teachers who is a writer himself, and he was amazed with the simplicity of the words..yet the power is unreal. Favorited!!


On Friday May 14th, 2004, Mr King (624) writes:
Amazing work... A favorite!


On Friday February 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:
wow ::silence:: what words are there to express this?


On Sunday December 7th, 2003, Raze Drake (108) writes:
I stand up and clap for this peoce. It was absolutly great, and is highly regarded as one of the best ones I have read here.


On Saturday September 6th, 2003, Ophelia (312) writes:
I must thank Matt for the fav. lists or I would have never read this, and it's well words just don't seem right, great.......O.


On Saturday September 6th, 2003, Recycled (161) writes:
This belongs on the all time ten best poems of the site. (Old site and new site combined)


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, spontaneous_insanity (10) writes:
This is absolutly great. It flowed wonderfully, but more importantly it had a great concept. You've shed a new light on "Those spaces in-between". ~SI~


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
oops...**even made me think a little. Now that's a sign of good poetry if I've ever seen one!


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
I clicked on this poem from someone else's favorite's list and let me say, I am surely not disoppointed. The whole poem flowed so nicely, I thought I was watching a movie! The line "One less day to make things right" really jumped out at me and even mad


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That was fuckin' great. It really made me think. Good stuff. Onto my favorite list it goes...thankyou


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This was truly brilliant and amazing...made me think and i read it over and over again to make sure i captured everything. Wow.


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Deliverence (813) writes:
Beautiful. I enjoyed this piece a lot. Reminds me of myself, and a struggle within.-Kefka


On Tuesday April 1st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
fucking brilliant.


On Sunday March 23rd, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:
"Shifting with the flame's dance", ya know I may have to just borrow that line.


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i must say FUCKNGOODSHIT!


On Friday March 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
That was really wonderful...I've read it 3 times now and everytime it gets better! GOOD JOB!!!!


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definetly one of my favorites! this poem is so inspiring and so well written...it's one of those u must read from time to time to feel alive! thanks


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Ravenblade (281) writes:
That is such an awesome poem, I really like the way its written as well as the whole point of it. I can relate so well to it, and it does have a really good flow to it.


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woooow! this was great! it goes into my fav! keep it up! :)


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Steve, wow.


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omfg steve. this is one of ur best



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