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H2O (r)

I once breathed the perfect breath
As long as I could, I held it in
But then I had to let it go
In order to live

Reflecting on another starry sky
Above there is a comet flying high
Making its journey towards the sun
Its tail pointing to where it came from

Made from rocks and ice as old as our earth
Leftovers from this solar system's spinning birth
They say much of the water in this worldly place
Originated from the void of outer space

Elements born from a dying star's tragedy
With our first kiss you became a part of me
And now I have a sense this ancient molecule
Has again returned you

I am now a part of you
You are now a part of me
And we are a part of everybody
Who was and will ever be

Circulating eternally
Recycling endlessly
The beautiful rain descending from the sky
May have once been the blood of Jesus Christ

Or from the venom of Cleopatra's asp
And a great dinosaur's final gasp
From containers we drink water clear
Perchance the blood, sweat and tears of a million years

And now the rhythm of my respiration
Is in sync with your articulation
I just breathed another perfect breath
I can't wait to breathe the next

As long as I can, I'll hold in
But I'll have to let it go in order to live
This ancient water molecule
That was once inside of you
Is now a part of me
As I am a part of you
And we are a part of everybody
Who was and will ever be

Circulating eternally
Recycling endlessly

© 2002 by steve giacomini

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On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:

I'm blown away every time I read this.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Mab (1028) writes:

I have felt this before...

On Saturday February 11th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:

*sigh* had to read this again... Like a breath of fresh air... ~V.

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:

Still yummy. ~V,

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (356) writes:

Beautiful and enchanting as always. ~T~

On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:

...*E*X*C*E*L*L*E*N*T*....+ i am at a loss of any other words.......

On Saturday August 21st, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

I know the thought, I know the feeling... and a powerful one it is. Nice work articulating it in a grasping way.

On Friday August 6th, 2004, sixsixnine (490) writes:

i love this! awesome work! *669*

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

very deep thoughts in this one. i was thought-provoked by this. well done, the language was great. :)

On Monday January 26th, 2004, Raven (378) writes:

Nicely done, this appeals to me so very much, being a topic I've often pondered... I never got around to creating a piece about it, and now I never need to... Kudos to you..._Raven

On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

:O my mouth is wide open.... amazing... nothing i can type can tell you how amazing. the metaphor between eternity and love are like a face dipped in still water

On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:

"May have once been the blood of Jesus Christ"....or the feces of buddha, or a piece of a turkey sandwich eaten by a pilgram........beautiful......alll life circles and biologically we all are one....nice write

On Monday August 25th, 2003, DarkPoet (230) writes:

You're a genius.

On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

I cannot believe I overlooked this poem. Each line mingled with the next to form a perfect infinite circle. A wondrous trip you have taken me on. ~Velvet~

On Saturday July 26th, 2003, Six-Out (1826) writes:

Steve, you never cease to amaze me with your insightful and deely profound works. Just damn.

On Saturday July 26th, 2003, Bast (899) writes:

this is brilliantly stunning... wow. cycle, birth is death is rebirth and life goes on...

On Friday July 25th, 2003, Clementine (153) writes:

Alpha Centuari and I had our differneces

On Friday July 25th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

profound, the way everthing links together into a whole, nice..........O.

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